Skydiving
“I can not believe you got me into this!” I was frightened as the plane steadily rose up into the air. I was even more frightened when I looked out the window. I thought wow I can not believe I am just to jump out of this plane and free fall until I open the parachute. I wondered what will become of me? Is this what it feels like to be at near death? But I guess I’ll do it I though. It was time to jump, I did not know what to think I didn’t want to jump but I had no choice since I was hooked to my eager friend Milou. I was in the front and when she jumped, it made us go spiraling rapidly down to earth. As we descended I wondered if this is what dying feels like. Then I felt this sudden warm feeling spread through out my body I loved it, it felt magical. I was flying, it was wonderful. Then we had to pull the parachute I was reluctant to pull it I loved the adrenaline rush running through me. As we slowly drifted back to earth I said to myself maybe Milou was right. Skydiving can be fun. When we reached the ground I told Milou “Thanks I really enjoyed this.”
A really good recount! Maybe a bit shorter sentences. Great effort though!!!
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